stonefaced and rigid
assembly line motions
humanoid faces covered with skin
wake up, for once, goddammit!
wake wake wake up mortal
dont break on the jagged cliffs of time
deep inhale- feel some air
for one sublime moment- live!
look at the sky above you mortal
and the flowers below
look at your palms, mortal
erase those goddamned lines
let all the poison flow free
unlock the pain inside
carve new lines out for yourself
gash them out with your teeth
for one glorious moment, FEEL
live like you've never dared
wake, wake, wake, mortal
dont break upon the cliffs of life.
6 comments:
I love it! This is one of ur finest works ... :)
the best lines - "carve new lines out for yourself
gash them out with your teeth
for one glorious moment, FEEL"
Are u talking to me? ... :) I think u are ...
hmm...im talking to myself..maybe others as well...
but thanks for the praise :)
U deserve every bit of it buddy! :)
Are you reading Swami Vivekananda's writings medy..reminds me of Arise Awake and stop not till the goal is reached....lolz
hmm..bt truly this kind of usurping attention and bossy verses are kinda cool..new style eh.
clean and simple. :)
esp
erase those goddamned lines
let all the poison flow free
unlock the pain inside
carve new lines out for yourself
gash them out with your teeth
.. wish i cud rehash and redraw everything, even my own obscure caricature..
uh..vinx..no i make it a principle not to read philosophy it screws up my head.
true!.... how easily we forget all the skies...n' all the rivers...all the trees n' all the grasses.... just to make ends meet... everyone is asleep ...includin everyone!
p.s. but it's good... now that you've cared enough to wake yourself up... or someone else... let the wakefulness remain for a while!
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