Thursday, June 09, 2005

we are not who we are
and you are not who you are
several moons have come and gone
since that day when we collided
and left holes in our soles
a century of silence seperated us
engulfing us in its chasms
each day saw us fight
you and me, our seperate battles
i patched up my armor with kevlar
and you sheathed yourself
in a wall of indifference
and yet aeons rolled by
but then somewhere down the line
the weight of centuries pushing me down
the shields cracked from side to side
and i was left alone
waiting upon your heart was i
and did i ever know
what you were, and would mean to me
ere the new leaves dropp'd dead
...
full fathom deep i threw my heart
and saw it writhe upon the lakes
the filmy grainy sands of time
bruised, battered, and carmine
and then you come, my old hero
in slightly rusted armour bent
no steed, no sword, for the damsel fine
nothing except a war wounded self
gaping holes and clawed finery
and yet there was a sable stole
and writ on it with words of gold
i wrapt the soot around us both
and went to sleep in your arms
the ruins of time befall us both
and still we plough on together
and if i regret my ruined minstrelsy
i look down, and smile
am i not the mistress of your heart?

14 comments:

Deepak Jeswal said...

Me First, and since I was the one of the few priveleged to hv a sneak preview of this, it feels good to be here. Lovely poem!

Φ said...

liked these lines esp..

and yet there was a sable stole
and writ on it with words of gold
i wrapt the soot around us both
and went to sleep in your arms
the ruins of time befall us both


Not many get to hear this 'Unsung hero' song..but the last line ate them all b4 that..leaving me with a question who fought the battle..

awsome..

Anonymous said...

liked these lines:

no steed, no sword, for the damsel fine
nothing except a war wounded self



lovely words.

Anonymous said...

:) dazzling brilliance...yet again.

L~

Hardeep said...

I think I should stop commenting here. Coz no words ever do justice to wat u write! :)

: M : said...

u have to nkow the history behind the creation of this poem ....DJ- mind tellin all?

: M : said...

@ vinod- there was no battle, really. its all metaphorical.

: M : said...

@ dino--thanks.

: M : said...

@ L, Hardeep- thanks..but no need to stop commenting. i like a critique of all my work

Φ said...

yea i know its metaphorical but I imagine things ;-)

Anonymous said...

@ vinod- u do dont u :) well..later..time will tell who lost n who won

CA

Anonymous said...

:)

Vinod

Anonymous said...

Second part really completes the first part, that you gave a sneak preview of, few days back. Lovely piece of writing. After reading all your poems, I could distictively see a certain style emerging from all of them, that's always a good sign.

I liked that you used simple words to write a complex piece of poetry in some sense. Good going...

Anonymous said...

Hey where are u..make some noise..

:)
Vinod